Question

6．假设你是李华，暑假期间你们将组织由外国学生参加的中国城市多元文化之旅活动--"Discovering China"，你刚到北京的美国朋友Tom 来信询问活动有关事宜．请你根据以下要点，给他写一封回信：
1．活动目的：
2．日程安排：（1）时间：一周；（2）路线：昆明-井冈山-上海-苏杭；
3．发出邀请．
注意：
1．词数120-150；开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
From your letter I know it's the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like．                                                    
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                             
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文为书信．
写作要点为：1．活动目的：
2．日程安排：（1）时间：一周；（2）路线：昆明-井冈山-上海-苏杭；
3．发出邀请．

解答 Dear Tom，
From your letter I know it's the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like．I'm glad to tell you that an exploring trip titled"Discovering China"is to be organized in the summer vacation．I think it's a good chance for you to learn more about China．I hope you can experience Chinese culture in every aspect．
First，we'll fly to Kunming，a popular tourist destination for its beauty and mild temperature．Then We'll head for Jinggangshan，which is a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot．After a one-day visit there．we'll board a downstream ship on the Yangtze River to Shanghai，and meanwhile we can enjoy the great scenery alongside．A famous saying goes，"Just as there is paradise in heaven，there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth"，so a two-day visit to these two cities is a must．The whole trip will last a week．
I earnestly invite you to join us．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．