Question

最近，某中学英文报开设了“保护濒危动物”的栏目。请你根据以下提示为该栏目写一篇120个词左右的的英文稿件。
1. 濒危动物数量：12,000多种
2．动物濒危的主要原因：栖息地被破坏，为高额利润而被猎杀；并举例说明
3. 被保护的现状：政府已建立自然保护区，颁布禁令禁止猎杀及买卖，加大惩处力度
4. 提出更多建议….…
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Saving the Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends and enjoy the equal right to live happily on earth. However,
more than 12,000 species are in danger of extinction.
There are several reasons for this. _____________________________________________________________ 
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Answer 1

Saving the Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends and enjoy the equal right to live happily on earth. However, more than 12,000 species are in danger of extinction. 
There are several reasons for this. The habitats of some animals are disappearing because of pollution and climate change. For example, the global warming melts the ice of the North Pole, endangering the polar bear. Besides, many animals are killed for their body parts. For instance, the Tibetan antelopes are killed because their wool can be made into shawls ,which can bring huge profits.
Fortunately, the governments have set up nature reserves and introduced bans on such illegal trade. Police are
getting tough with poachers and dealers. But it’s also common people’s responsibility to protect them. To avoid more damage to the environment we should live in an environment friendly way. Never buy products made from body parts of endangered animals and tell more people about the situations of the animals. Only when everyone is involved will we save them from extinction.

试题分析：本题是一篇话题类材料作文。要求以Saving the Endangered Animals为题，写一篇关于动物保护的文章。题目已经列出写作要点，写作时，所有要点都要包含在内。可以分三部分来写。第一部分是濒危动物的数量和濒危的原因；第二部分写动物保护的现状；第三部分写自己的建议。注意人称和时态的使用，做到行文流畅，条理清晰。
亮点说明：范文使用了一般现在时、现在完成时和现在进行时等来描述濒危动物的现状，和提出建议。范文使用了For example, Besides, For instance, Fortunately, But等短语和连接词，使上下文连贯、通顺。运用了reasons for, The habitats of, because of, in danger of, are killed for, set up, bans on, getting tough with, damage to, save them from等短语，使文章充实，有说服力。范文也使用了非谓语动词endangering the polar bear, 原因状语从句because their..., 固定句型it’s also common people’s responsibility to protect them, 祈使句Never buy products..., 倒装Only when等句型，语法知识运用灵活，特别是非谓语动词和倒装句型的运用，给文章增色不少。