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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today is Saturday．The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life．In about 9：00am，I went to a bookstore with my friends．There were such many new books that I didn't know which one to buy，because these books were both useful to me．At last，I choose two．At 10：00，my friends and I went to the cinema，for we knew what the film Titanicwas very popular．It took us about 3hours to see the film．After seeing the film，everyone was deep moved．From the story，I understand that love is noble and valuable．That's really wonderful film．It is well worth seen again．
What a happy day!I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

分析本文作者通过讲述自己在星期六做过的一些事情，表达了自己愉快的心情以及积极的生活态度．

解答 Today is Saturday．The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life．
In about 9：00am，I went to a bookstore with my friends．There
were such many new books that I didn't know which one to buy，
because these books were both useful to me．At last，I choose two．
At 10：00，my friends and I went to the cinema，for we knew what
the film Titanic was very popular．It took us about 3hours to see the
film．After seeing the film，everyone was deep moved．From the story，
I understand that love is noble and valuable．That's∧really （∧）wonderful film．
It is well worth seen again．
What a happy day!I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!
详解：
1．does改为is   考查固定句型结构"So+do+主语"此句型为倒装结构，so代表上句中陈述的肯定内容，do可以是连系动词、情态动词或助动词，且必须与上句中的谓语动词保持一致，意思为"…也是如此"；由于上一句"The sky is full of sunshine"的谓语动词是系动词，本句的主语my life为第三人称单数形式；故用is．
2．In改为At      考查介词     此处用在点钟的前面，应使用介词At．
3．such改为so     考查副词    such为形容词，一般修饰名词；so为副词，一般修饰形容词或副词；此处用来修饰形容词many，故用副词so．
4．both改为all     考查不定代词    both指两者，all表示三者或三者以上；此处指的是许多书；故用all．
5．choose改为chose     考查时态    根据上文可知，此处描述的是周六上午发生的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用chose．
6．what改为that或去掉what    考查宾语从句   此处用在动词knew之后，引导宾语从句；由于该从句中不缺少任何成分，故可用连接词that或省略that，即去掉what．
7．deep改为deeply    考查副词    此处用来修饰形容词moved，故用副词deeply．
8．That's后加a或really后加a     考查不定冠词   此处用来修饰单数名词film，表示泛指一部很精彩的电影；故在That's后加a或really后加a．
9．seen改为seeing    考查固定结构    be well worth doing 意为：很值得做某事；故用seeing．
10．happy改为happier    考查形容词的比较级     此处用在副词even之后，表示二者的比较；即将作者今明两天的心情进行了比较；故用happier．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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