Question

作为一名高一学生，名叫李华，你对部分同学迷于玩电子游戏的现象很着急，便向一家英文报社编辑部寄了一封信，阐述了玩电子游戏机的坏处。

要点：

1. 电子游戏在学生中很流行，有些学生整天玩电子游戏，忘记了做作业，甚至逃学。

2. 玩电子游戏要花很多钱，有的经常向父母要钱，有的经常向同学借，有的甚至偷同学的钱。

3. 过分玩电子游戏使店主受益，对同学的学习和健康不利。

4. 希望政府采取措施加以制止。

注意: 1. 词数100左右;

2. 信件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数;

3. 可以适当增节细节，以使行文连贯.

4. 提示词：电子游戏video games；逃学play truant

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________________________

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Yours ever,

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay a great deal of money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for money, borrow and even steal money from their classmates.

Too much video games playing needs time, money and energy. The others benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.

I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.

Yours ever,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。