Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理想的高中生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完成短文。

1.在校学习情况；

2.老师与同学；

3.学校活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.司以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school.

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Answer 1

【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school. As far as I can imagine, First of all, in high school I should have a good study environment so that I can obtain sufficient knowledge. This study environment should encourage students to learn to think, analyze and understand the daily life.

The teachers there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons. In addition, I’ll have lovely and caring classmates. We’ll compete in our study and be close friends in our daily life. In our free time, various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience, such as parties and competitions, I’m sure my high school life will be rich and colorful.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理想的高中生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完成短文。1.在校学习情况；2.老师与同学；3.学校活动。其次要确定时态，因为是一个畅想，所以用一般将来时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如The teachers there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。In our free time, various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience, such as parties and competitions, I’m sure my high school life will be rich and colorful.这里含有一个宾语从句。