Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend Sally is very outgoing girl in my class. She had many hobbies, such as writing poems, playing the pingpong and painting. Her favorable subject is art. She became interested in it when she was very young. Her dream is to study aboard. But now she is trying to improve her English and learn more about west culture as well. She will never give up once she makes up her mind. She believes in one day she will be able to improving the friendship between China and the rest of the world. I hope my dream will come true.

Answer 1

1.加a

2.had改为has

3.去掉the

4.favorable改为favorite

5.aboard改为abroad

6.But 改为so

7.west改为western

8.去掉in;或者把in改为that

9.improving改为improve

10.my改为her

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题

1. friend Sally is very outgoing girl in my class，girl为可数名词，需加数量词，故加a

2. had many hobbies，整篇文章都是以一般现在时来介绍Sally，本句说的是她平常的爱好，应当用现在时表述，故had改为has

3. the pingpong，此句错在固定搭配，打乒乓球中间不要定冠词the，而像弹钢琴play the piano 则需要，故去掉the

4. favorable subject is art，favorable意为顺利的，良好的，有利的；结合下文可知第三句是说她最喜欢的科目是艺术，故favorable改为favorite

5. dream is to study aboard，此句的意思是说她的梦想是去国外学习，而aboard作副词讲是“上船，上飞机；在船上”.故aboard改为abroad

6. 改为so；第六句But now she is trying to improve her English，上文是说她很想出国，所以现在正在提高自己的英语，上下文是因果关系，不是转折关系，故But 改为so

7. more about west culture as well，第六句意为学习更多的西方文化，west是名词，意为西方，故把west改为它的形容词形式，意为学习更多的西方文化，故west改为western

8. believes in one day she will，believe后可接（that）宾语从句，而believe in 后不能接从句，故in改为that（that可省略）

9. believes in one day she will be able to improving the friendship，词组be able to后加动词原形，故improving改为improve

10. my改为her；最后一句I hope my dream will come true，整篇文章都是在介绍Sally,诉说她的兴趣爱好梦想，故是我希望她的梦想成真，故my改为her

考点：考查基础语法和篇章理解能力