Question

【题目】微信朋友圈似乎已经成为我们与朋友沟通交流必不可少的工具，目前很多中学生也都开通了微信，在朋友圈里发表一些自己的感想。你想让父母看你的朋友圈吗？某英语报社就这一问题做了调查，结果如下：

40%同意	60%反对
父母可以了解我们的思想动态，及时沟通； 父母可以保护我们不受欺； ……	每个人都需要隐私，朋友圈是我们的私人空间； 我们与父母之间有代沟，让他们看我们的朋友圈可能产生误会； ……

请根据以上信息写一篇短文，向该报社描述这一现象，并发表自己的看法。

注意：词数不少于100字。

参考词汇：微信Wechat 朋友圈Moments

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays,it seems that the Moments section of Wechat has become a popular part of the social networking platform.But do you think parents should be allowed to see their children's Moments?According to the newly- conducted survey above,the results are as follows:

40% of the students surveyed think parents should be allowed.Firstly,welcoming parents to their Moments will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.Besides,teenagers are easily misled by the complicated society.If they give their parents a place in their online world,they can be protected.

However,60% of the participants think otherwise.First and foremost,everyone needs some privacy and has their own secrets and lifestyles.Moreover,the generation gap is always a big problem.A lot of misunderstandings may arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.

Anyway,in my opinion,I believe blocking our parents in Moments is not a bad idea,as no social media can replace face-to-face communication.

【解析】这是一篇描述性并表明观点的提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意分类与总结。全文应包含两种不同的观点，要注意分类书写，明确简洁，且对比明显。同时也要总结自身观点，结合实际给出理由。

【范文亮点】

文章条理结构清晰。开篇结合实际，提出问题，同时引出下文不同观点，具有吸引力。二三四段分别写了两种不同观点及理由和自己的看法，明确简洁。

采用了主语从句（Nowadays,it seems that the Moments section of Wechat has become a popular part of the social networking platform.）和动名词作主语（Firstly,welcoming parents to their Moments will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.）等高级句式。

采用了According to ，Firstly，Besides,However,First and foremost,Moreover,Anyway,In my opinion等多种连接词，形式多样，使句子灵活串起。