Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你 “十一”假期将要怎么过。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你在“十一”假期中的活动的安排。

内容要点：

1.休息（由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息）

2.看望乡下的祖父母（帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们谈谈身边的新鲜事）

注意：

1.词数100个左右；可适当增加细节

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3.词汇 国庆假期：National Day Holiday

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.

First, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What’s more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air.

What did you do during your holiday? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你 “十一”假期将要怎么过。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你在“十一”假期中的活动的安排。

内容要点：1.休息（由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息）。2.看望乡下的祖父母（帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们谈谈身边的新鲜事）。其次要确定时态，发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.这里含有一个宾语从句。Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends.这里含有一个宾语从句。