Question

2．假设你正在参加一场英语演讲比赛，你抽到的演讲题目是"Time and tide wait for no man"，请你就该话题发表演讲．内容包括：
（1）．你对此话题的理解；
（2）．用自己的一个事例阐述说明；
（3）．总结发言．
注意：
（1）．词数100左右；
（2）．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad today to stand here to make this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuable and it is a bird forever on the wing．Therefore we should make full use of it．
One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!
Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．．
That's a11．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，根据所提供的材料，写一篇演讲稿，演讲题目是"Time and tidewait for no man"．写作要点包括：对这句话的理解；用自己的一个事例阐述说明；总结发言．写作时应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．人称以第一和第三人称．重要短语：make thisspeech （发表演讲），make fulluse of（充分利用），make acquaintances with （熟悉），fall into bad habits（养成坏习惯），help sb out of …（帮某人摆脱…），have a strongsense of time （强烈的时间观念）．

解答 Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad to stand here tomake this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuableand it is a bird forever on the wing．【高分句型】Therefore we should make full use of it．（对这句话的理解）
      One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!（用自己的一个事例阐述说明）
     Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．【高分句型】（总结发言）
    That's all．Thank you for attention．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．