Question

【题目】假如你是某英文报的小记者,近几年，某些旅行社组织中学生在寒暑假期间赴著名大学旅游，人们对此褒贬不一。针对这一现象,请写一篇短文。

注意：1.要点如下：

(1)介绍问题； (2)人们对此不同的看法；(3)表明自己的观点。

2.字数：不少于100。

3.参考词汇：旅行社 travel agency 校园 campus

In recent years, various tourism agencies

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, various tourism agencies organize high school students to visit campuses of famous universities around the country during their summer and winter holidays. People’s opinions vary a lot over this issue.

On the one hand, many people, including some students, hold the opinion that university tours provide them with precious opportunities to see and experience university life. And this experience might inspire them to work harder to fulfill their dreams.

On the other hand, some other people think that it is no use just walking around a university. This kind of understanding is only skin-deep and it can be nothing but a waste of money and time.

In my opinion, since tourism will inevitably affect the normal life of the university students who stay on campus to study during the holidays, such tours make little sense to me.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇针对现象所进行的议论文写作。针对旅行社在寒假期间组织中学生到著名大学旅行的现象进行讨论分析。要首先说明问题，再分别介绍不同的看法，以及说明自己的观点。因此观点要全面，力求客观公正。时态：用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【亮点说明】第二自然段第一句On the one hand, many people, including some students, hold the opinion that university tours provide them with precious opportunities to see and experience university life.使用that引导的同位语从句，直接说明支持一方的观点；第三自然段第一句话On the other hand, some other people think that it is no use just walking around a university.使用that引导的宾语从句，进一步呈现反方的观点。最后一自然段In my opinion, since tourism will inevitably affect the normal life of the university students who stay on campus to study during the holidays,使用who引导的定语从句，说明我自己的观点。使用了hold the opinion，it is no use doing sth，provide sb with…，it can be nothing but…，make little sense to sb等句型和短语，使得文章更加生动，表达更加准确到位。分别使用On the one hand,On the other hand, In my opinion,来呈现支持方、反对方以及自己的观点，使得文章层次分明，调理清晰。