Question

15．最近，越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍．请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点．词数100左右．
1．学习时间；  2．安全；  3．自由性；  4．与同学交往；  5．学习效果．
    注意：可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理由都至少要有两条．
要求：字迹工整，段落清晰．
                                                                                
                                                                               

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇议论文，首先表明租房和住大宿舍有什么优点和缺点，将对此现象表明自己的观点提升为要点，更为重要进行阐述，再举例对自己支持与否的说明，写作中使用万能句型造句，写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．
重要短语：rent houses（租房），enable sb．to do sth．（能让某人做某事），adapt to（适应），prepare for（为…做准备），as for（至于…），devote oneself to doing sth．（致力于做某事），prefer doing sth．（宁愿做某事）
高分句型：
1．A dorm is more like a society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，thus preparing for the social life later．
此处是which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词a society，preparing for是现在分词短语充当结果状语．

解答 Nowadays，some students would not like to live in a dorm．Instead，they rent houses outside the school．There are advantages for both．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates．And of course it is safer．A dorm is more like a society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting houses to live alone，it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others．As a result，you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly．But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school．
Anyhow，as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．

点评 写作时应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．