Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：

1. 合理饮食； 2.加强锻炼； 3.保证睡眠。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy. I’d like to give you some advice.

As you know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a variety of food, such as fish and meat, especially vegetables and fruits. You’d better cut down the food rich in sugar or fat. Besides, you should take physical exercise regularly. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封建议信。

第一步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 合理饮食；2.加强锻炼； 3.保证睡眠。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：keep healthy, healthy and balanced diet, energy and nutrients, a variety of food, take physical exercise, having enough sleep, stay up, keep fit.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。