Question

7．为了庆祝地球日，4月22日我们学校组织了一系列环保活动．假设你是李明，请你根据下面的要点，写一封信给你的笔友Jane，简述我们学校开展的活动，借此号召人们保护我们居住的地球．
要点如下：
1．一些人种树；一些人捡垃圾；
2．许多人为保护森林及濒危动物捐款；
3．一些学生向过路人宣传森林被砍伐、野生动物被杀所造成的后果．
要求：
1．必须包括以上要点    2．词数：100左右
3．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jane，
How are things going on with you？
                                                                                
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 写作文要用的，注意时态，是已经发生过的事．这是一场很大的环保活动，在这项活动里，我们做了三项工作．第一，为了能保护好环境，一些同学参加了种树和捡垃圾；第二，许多人为保护森林和动物捐款；第三，还有学生向路人宣传森林被伐，野生动物被杀所造成的后果．我们希望借此活动，号召人们保护我们所居住的地球，因为地球只有一个，是我们的家，我们应该保它．上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮点说明】
Most of us also donated money to organizations that help save forests and endangered animals．（高分句型）带有that引导的定语从句
Several groups of students went to the streets，telling the passers-by how seriously our earth has been damaged．（高分句型）telling属于现在分词作状语
By doing all these，we would like everybody to know that we have only one earth and we should protect it．（高分句型）带有that引导的宾语从句

解答 Dear Jane，
 How are things going on with you？
 In order to celebrate the Earth Day，our school organized a lot of activities on April 22．
 In the morning，some of us planted trees．Some picked up rubbish in the neighborhood or parks．Most of us also donated money to organizations that help save forests and endangered animals．（高分句型）Several groups of students went to the streets，telling the passers-by how seriously our earth has been damaged．（高分句型）A lot of rich soil is being washed away and the globe is becoming warmer and warmer after the forests are cut down．Some kinds of wild animals are on the edge of dying out because a lot of them have been killed．
By doing all these，we would like everybody to know that we have only one earth and we should protect it．（高分句型）What do you think of it？
 Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                              Yours
                                              Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．