Question

4．假如你是红星中学高三1班李华．寒假期间你和同学们参加了志愿者服务活动．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们去阳光福利院陪伴儿童的经历．
注意：词数不少于60．

This winter holiday my classmates and I went to the Sunshine Welfare House for voluntary work．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序及所给内容要点用英文写一篇短文，介绍去阳光福利院陪伴儿童的经历．既是情景作文又是一种开放性作文．
在写作时，以第一人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．
重点词汇：winter holiday（寒假）； voluntary work（志愿者工作）；talk about（谈论）；play with sb （和某人一起玩）；tell stories（讲故事）；
wave goodbye（挥手告别）；accompany（陪伴）．
高分句型：1．Before we went there，we talked about what we could do for the kids over the phone．
                 这里before引导一个时间状语从句，后面的疑问代词what引导一个宾语从句．
                 2．The next day，we arrived there with gifts we had prepared，and we received a warm welcome．
                 with介词短语作伴随状语．
                 3．We spent the whole afternoon with them，talking and laughing．
                  句子的主语we和动词talk，laugh存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故此处用现在分词作伴随状语．

解答 This winter holiday my classmates and I went to the Sunshine Welfare House for voluntary work．
Before we went there，we talked about what we could do for the kids over the phone（高分句型一）．The next day，we arrived there with gifts we had prepared，and we received a warm welcome（高分句型二）．Then we began to play with them．I drew pictures with the older kids，and my classmates told stories to the younger ones．We spent the whole afternoon with them，talking and laughing（高分句型三）．It was getting late．We waved goodbye to them and felt delighted to be able to accompany those children．

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．