Question

13．假如你是红星中学业高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为"A Volunteer Day"的英文稿件．请根据以下四幅图所提供的情景，叙述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活动的完整过程．
    注意：
    1．短文的开头已为你写好．
    2．词数不少于60．
    提示词语：patrol vt．巡视   trim vt．修整

    Last December 5^th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day．We decided to spend the day doing something for our school instead of having classes．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图．做题时：1．认真读图，可知四幅图讲述的是你班志愿者日活动的完整过程．2．初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态．3．连词成句，然后再连句成文．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容．4．反复审核，修改错误．5．注意所给的汉语提示．一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息．在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容． 
亮点句型一：At the beginning of the first class in the morning，we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do．在早上第一节课开始的时候，我们聚集在教室里，班长告诉我们该怎么办．这句话用了宾语从句 what we would do做told的宾语．what在宾语从句中做do的宾语．
 亮点句型二：Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order．第4组在实验室工作，在那里他们清洗试管，并把他们在良好的秩序．这句话用了定语从句，先行词是lab在定语从句 they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order中做地点状语，所以用关系副词where引导．
亮点句型三：Having got the work done，we all felt a sense of achievement．做完工作后，我们都有成就感．这句话用了非谓语动词Having got the work done．

解答 Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day．We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes．
      At the beginning of the first class in the morning，we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do．（亮点句型一）As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately．I was in Group 1．My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school．We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school．The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants．Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush．The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes．They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces．Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order．（亮点句型二）Having got the work done，we all felt a sense of achievement．（亮点句型三）At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day．【描述活动过程】
      What a valuable experience I had in the high school!I'll remember it forever．

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型