Question

【题目】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

A friend of mine named Paul received an automobile from his brother as a Christmas present.

On Christmas Eve when Paul came out of his office, a little boy was walking around the shiny new car, admiring it. "Is this your car, Mister?" he asked.

Paul nodded. "My brother gave it to me for Christmas." "The boy was astounded. "You mean your brother gave it to you and it didn't cost you anything? Boy, I wish..." He hesitated.

Of course Paul knew what he was going to wish for. He was going to wish he had a brother like that. But what the lad said jarred Paul all the way down to his heels.

"I wish," the boy went on, "that I could be a brother like that” Paul looked at the boy in astonishment, then impulsively he added, "Would you like to take a ride in my automobile?"

"Oh yes, I'd love that."

After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes aglow, said, "Mister, would you mind driving in front of my house?"

Paul smiled a little. He thought he knew what the lad wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big automobile. But Paul was wrong again. "Will you stop where those two steps are?" the boy asked.

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He ran up the steps.

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Paul got out and lifted the lad to the front seat of his car.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

He ran up the steps. Then in a little while Paul heard him coming back, but he was coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled brother. He sat him down on the bottom step, then pointing to the car. 'There she is. Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn't cost him a cent. And some day I'm going to give you one just like it then you can see for yourself all the pretty things in the Christmas windows that I've been trying to tell you about.

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Paul got out and lifted the lad to the front seat of his car. The shining eyed older brother climbed in beside him. The older brother gently fastened the safety belt for his brother and politely asked, 'Mister, would you mind continuing driving around?" Deeply touched, Paul happily drove the car on the road again. That Christmas Eve, the three of them began a memorable holiday ride. That Christmas Eve was the happiest time that Paul had ever spent, because he learned what Jesus meant when he had said: "It is more blessed to give..."

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了，一个男孩看到保罗哥哥送给他的圣诞礼物——一辆新车，这个男孩希望自己也可以像保罗的哥哥那样，给自己的弟弟送圣诞节礼物。

续写分为两段，第一段的开头是：他跑上台阶。所以可以接着写：他走上台阶，过了一会又跑回来，然后对着他的弟弟说：“瞧，这就是我给你说的那辆车。他哥哥送给他的圣诞节礼物，他一分钱都没花。以后我也像他的哥哥一样，把你想要的、最好的东西送给你。”第二段的开头是：保罗下车，把小男孩抱到前坐上。所以可以接着写：保罗说：“今天我是你们的大哥哥，我载着你们去逛一圈。” 哥哥听了，很感动。保罗开心地围着小区转了几圈，兄弟俩也很开心。他们三个度过了一个快乐难忘的圣诞节前夜。保罗也明白了：当快乐被分成几份时，更快乐。

续写时应注意时态，直接引语和间接引语的运用。