Question

9．生活中处处充满阳光，每个人都会得到同学的帮助、朋友的支持、老师的关心和亲人的爱护，让你感受到生活中的阳光和幸福．请写一件你经历过的事，说明生活是美好的．
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine．
有人说，生活是快乐的，但是其他人觉得生活是不快乐的．在我看来，生命是美丽而充满阳光．
高分句型二：
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever．
也许有时我们会感到不幸，但我们应该相信生活是美好的．帮助和爱永远在我们身边．

解答 Sunshine in My Life
Everyone has different ideas about life．Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine（高分句型一）．
Several weeks ago，one of my classmates Sun was badly ill．He had to be in hospital for a long time．But his family was too poor to afford it．What could we do？We decided to raise money for him．Everyone in our class took out our pocket money．Then，we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others．When we sent all the money to him，he and his parents were deeply moved．
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．