Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友CROWN 写信说他打算学习汉语，让你帮他推荐一本汉语词典，请你根据以下提示给他回信。

1. 推荐《现代汉语学习词典》，商务印书馆出版（定价68元）

2.推荐理由：外观设计精美; 大字号，方便查阅：词例丰富实用，适合初级学习者

3.希望对方满意。

写作要求：1.词数100字。2. 开头已写好，不计入总词数。 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

参考词汇：商务印书馆 The Commercial Press 《现代汉语学习词典》Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary 词例，词条 entry

Dear Crown,

I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Crown,

I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese. First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press. Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words. More importantly, the entries are abundant and practical. Last but not the least, it is cheap at a price of 68 RMB. I hope the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary will meet your need and be of great help to you.

Best wishes!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信写作，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读题目中提供的有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据提示信息，按照一定逻辑关系来写。写信件时要注意有条理地表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言整体应该用一般现在时，根据情况有一般将来时。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，首先介绍了推荐书籍，然后说明了推荐理由，最后希望对方满意。文章还而且使用了多种句式和结构，比如First of all，More importantly，Last but not the least等插入语，使文章内容更具有层次感，语言流畅。另外，句式多样化，在Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words.和Iit is cheap at a price of 68 RMB.中用it做形式主语防止整句头重脚轻； First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press.是定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语intended for，look up，meet your need，be of great help等，使文章行文更加流畅。这篇书信条理清晰，感情真挚。