Question

19．半期考试后，你班班主任在安排座位时，打算让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论．现在请你根据以下讨论结果用英语向班主任写一封信反映一下，并简要陈述自己的观点．
赞同的理由：1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；
2．相互学习，建立友谊；
3．通过帮助学习差的学生的学习从而使他们建立自信．
反对的理由：1．部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯；
2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习．
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注      意：1．词数：120词左右．
2．短文需包括以上所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Although they are not good at lesson，they might do well in other fields like sports or arts．
高分句型二：
They think some slower students are always making trouble，such as keeping talking in class，which may lead to them forming the bad habits．
句型一 Although they are not good at lesson…该句是一个由although引导的让步状语从句，且在该从句的谓语部分使用了一个固定短语：be good at sth 在某方面擅长
句型二 which may lead to them forming the bad habits．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，替代前面整个主句的内容．
此外，还有以下短语：in addition    in one's opinion    share sth with sb

解答 Dear Mr．Zhang，
   We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student．（提出论点）
   Some are for the idea．As they know，everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses．Although they are not good at lessons，they might do well in other fields like sports or arts．（高分句型一）Therefore，they can learn from each other．In addition，top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons，which benefits them all． However，others don't hold the same view．They think some slower students are always making trouble，such as keeping talking in class，which may lead to them forming the bad habits．（高分句型二）Besides，slower students often ask top students questions，which has a bad effect on their studies．（阐述理由）
   In my opinion，I'd like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together．（发表个人观点）
Yours，
Li Ping

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．