Question

4．Read the instructions（指导、说明） carefully and then finish the writing．Think of two cities you know well，and you can't help thinking of your hometown---Dalian and Xiamen in Fujian Province．Please write a short passage about some of the following features：（at least three features should be included），the beginning of the passage has been given．The total number of it should be within 110．
*population*climate*industry*location*tourism*transport．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）They are both medium-sized cities of between 600，000 and 700，000 inhabitants，which both have universities and industries．
该句型使用which引导一个非限制定语从句，which做主语，指代先行词两个城市；
（高分句型二）Every summer tourists are pouring in and out of the two cities，making the cities too crowded．
making…现在分词做状语，表示结果．
高级词汇：inhabitant栖息地；be close to 靠近；tourist attractions旅游景点；honestly speaking诚实地讲；

解答 How are my  hometown-Dalian and Xiamen in Fujian similar？
（高分句型一）They are both medium-sized cities of between 600，000 and 700，000 inhabitants，which both have universities and industries．Tourism is especially important to both of them and they are both close to the broad sea with many beautiful tourist attractions，such as Dalian Ocean Park，Bird Singing Woods，the Wuyi Mountains and Gulangyu Island in Xiamen and at the same time they are modern cities with high buildings，too．（高分句型二）Every summer tourists are pouring in and out of the two cities，making the cities too crowded．And honestly speaking，this disturbs the life of inhabitants．However，as a native of Dalian，I'm proud of my hometown and love it very much．

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