1.November 20,1924
Dear Scott:
I think you have every kind of right to be proud of this book---The Great Gatsby(了不起的盖茨比).It is an extraordinary book,suggestive of all sorts of thoughts and moods.You adopted exactly the right method of telling it,that of employing a narrator who is more of a spectator(旁观者)than an actor:this puts the reader upon a point of observation on a higher level than that on which the characters stand and at a distance that gives perspective.
I could go on praising the book,but points of criticism are more important now.I think you are right in feeling some looseness in chapters six and seven,and I don't know how to suggest a remedy.I hardly doubt that you will find one and I am only writing to say that I think it does need something to hold up here to the pace set,and following.I have only two actual criticisms:
One is that among a set of characters marvelously vivid and vital-I would know Tom Buchanan if I met him on the street and would avoid him-Gatsby is somewhat vague.The reader's eyes can never quite focus upon him,his outlines are dim.This may be somewhat of an artistic intention,but I think it is mistaken.Couldn't he be physically described as distinctly as the others,and couldn't you add one or two characteristics like the use of that phrase"old sport"-not verbal,but physical ones,perhaps.I think that for some reason or other a reader gets an idea that Gatsby is a much older man than he is.But this would be avoided if on his first appearance he was seen as vividly as Daisy and Tom are,for instance-and I do not think your scheme would be weakened if you made him so.
The other point is also about Gatsby:his career must remain mysterious,of course.But in the end you make it pretty clear that his wealth came through his connection with Wolfsheim.Now almost all readers are going to be puzzled by his having all this wealth and demand an explanation.To give a distinct and definite one would be,of course,completely absurd.It did occur to me,though,that you might here and there insert some phrases,and possibly incidents that would suggest that he was in some active way mysteriously engaged.You do have him called on the telephone,but couldn't he be seen once or twice consulting at his parties with people of some sort of mysterious significance,from the political,the gambling,the sporting world,or whatever it may be.If some sort of business activity of his were simply suggested,it would lend further probability to that part of the story.
There is one other point:in giving deliberately Gatsby's biography,when he gives it to the narrator,you do withdraw from the method of the narrative in some degree,for otherwise almost everything is told,and beautifully told,in the regular flow of it.But you can't avoid the biography altogether.I thought you might find ways to let the truth of some of his claims like his army career come out,bit by bit,in the course of actual narrative.
The general brilliant quality of the book makes me ashamed to make even these criticisms.The amount of meaning you get into a sentence,the dimensions and intensity of the impression you make a paragraph carry,are most extraordinary.It seems,in reading,a much shorter book than it is,but it carries the mind through a series of experiences that one would think would require a book of three times its length.
You once told me you were not a natural writer-my God!You have plainly mastered the craft,of course; but you needed far more than craftsmanship for this.
As ever,--Maxwell E.Perkins
65.The author wrote this letter in order toC.
A.praise Scott had written a magnificent book
B.criticize Scott's description of Gatsby
C.help Scott improve his book
D.discuss the writing skills applied by Scott
66.How many suggestions did Perkins offer in his letter?B
A.Two.
B.Three.
C.Four.
D.Five.
67.By"I would know Tom Buchanan if I met him on the street and would avoid him,"Perkins intends to sayC.
A.he does not like Tom Buchanan
B.he has never met Tom Buchanan before
C.some characters in the book are described very well
D.Gatsby is mysterious compared to Tom Buchanan
68.It can be inferred from the passage thatB.
A.the method of telling the story disconnects readers from the book
B.Scott might deliberately describes Gatsby in an unclear way
C.a clear explanation will help readers understand Gatsby's business
D.the book is too short for the amount of content delivered in it
69.What does"You have plainly mastered the craft,of course; but you needed far more than craftsmanship for this."mean?D
A.Scott is too modest about his talents.
B.Scott is a born talented writer.
C.Scott needs to improve his writing skills.
D.Scott has to better himself in other aspects.
70.In writing this letter,Perkins appears to beA.
A.polite and straightforward
B.proud but insightful
C.modest and uncertain
D.sharp and definite.
分析 这是一封柏金斯写给美国作家斯科特菲兹杰拉德信函,内容是关于修改小说《了不起的盖茨比》的建议.
解答 65.C.文章主旨题.纵观全文内容可知柏金斯在赞扬《了不起的盖茨比》一书的同时,重点提出了自己的修改意见,所以C项正确.
66.B.细节理解题.由第三段One is that among a set of characters marvelously vivid、第四段The other point is also about Gatsby、第五段There is one other point:in giving deliberately Gatsby's biography,可知柏金斯提出了关于盖茨比的形象描写、财富来源和生平经历三方面的意见.故选B.
67.C.推理判断题.画线句意思是说柏金斯在路上遇到小说中的人物Tom Buchanan会主动避开,作用是为了说明前一句小说中的一组人物形象既生动又重要.故选C.
68.B.推理判断题.根据第三段"This may be somewhat of an artistic intention",可以推知菲兹杰拉德可能是出于艺术创作的需要,把盖茨比的形象描写得比较模糊,故选B项.
69.D.推理判断题.最后一句意思为柏金斯表扬了菲兹杰拉德的写作技巧高超,同时有指出菲兹杰拉德还需要在技巧之外多加磨练,所以D项正确.
70.A.观点态度题.纵观全文柏金斯多出赞扬了菲兹杰拉德的高超技艺,又客气委婉地提出了自己的建议,因此是礼貌坦率的,故选A项.
点评 在做阅读理解时,考生可快速阅读短文,通读测试题,明确考察点,在对应细读,加快做题速度.有时间还可以复查校对答案.