Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条道路可以选择：“长江之行” 或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 你建议的路线；

2. 你的理由；

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of the Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.

Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

Your,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文。我们可以根据提示将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。文章语言简练，结构严谨，覆盖所有要点。表语从句：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice.