Question

书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，参加了你校今天（九月二十七日，星期五）举办的以“我的梦想”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，描述比赛的情况及你的表现和感受。

注意：

1. 词数100左右（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Friday 27th September 2014

I attended the English speech contest on the topic “My Dream” held by my school this afternoon. _____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Friday 27th September 2013

I attended the English speech contest on the topic “My Dream” held by my school this afternoon.

The first 6 candidates performed very well. So I felt a little worried about whether I could also do as well as them. At the thought of the words “I can do it”, I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn, when I said “My dream is to be a teacher. Teaching gives me an opportunity to keep on learning”, my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on to do my best. Finally I won first prize.

Becoming a teacher is not so easy as I said, but I'll keep my word and do my best to make it come true.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语worry about担心；do one’s best 尽全力；keep one’s word遵守诺言 ；come true实现；

考点： 提纲类作文