Question

最近你班同学就许多家长在学校附近租（rent）房陪读的现象进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果写一篇100词左右的短文，并谈谈你的看法。

赞成（35%）	反对（65%）	你的观点
环境好、条件好， 利于学习	浪费钱、消耗父母精力； 增加学生精神负担	……

参考词汇：陪伴 company  租 rent
Recently, our class have had a discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to rent a house to company their children near the school.
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Answer 1

Recently, our class have had a discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to rent a house to company their children near the school.
35% of my classmates support the idea. They say they’d rather live in such a house because the conditions and the environment there are much better, which they think is very necessary for their studies. However, 65% of the students don’t think it a good idea. In their opinion, it is a waste of money and parents’ energy. Besides, the parents’ company may make the children feel more nervous.
Since every coin has its two sides, I think everyone should consider their own personal situation before they decide whether they need to rent a house and their parents’ company.

试题分析：本文属于正反观点类的议论文，高三的考生对于此类题目是非常熟悉的。话题是陪读的优点和缺点，本文要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译成英语。在写作的过程中要添加合适的连接词，如for one thing, for another; As far as I am concerned等。让各要点组成一个有机联系的整体。同时也要使用高级的词汇和句型给文章增加文采。
点评：本篇文章内容比较简单，难度在于谋篇布局和组织要点发表个人的观点。在发表个人观点的时候，要使用合适的谚语来提高文章的档次和层次。