Question

阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Gaby Lucy is just a 17-year-old American girl, but she has experienced life in the Dominican Republic as a volunteer. When she recalls her time volunteering there, she doesn’t think about the fact that she had no running water and lived in a small house outside. Instead, she remembers fondly the people she met, the work she did with a youth group to improve accessibility to a local library and the leadership skills she gained.
American teens are setting an example to their parents through their volunteer work, according to a new survey by Harris Interactive. The random national telephone survey released this week found that more teens volunteer to support a charitable cause(慈善事业) – 56 percent – than have a part-time job –39 percent. Parents said 82 percent of the teens in their lives do something to support charitable causes, including volunteering, inviting others to a cause or donating money.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；
2．以约120个词就 “青少年从事志愿者工作” 这个主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：
(1) 青少年从事志愿者工作的意义；
(2) 简述一次你自己或你身边的人从事志愿者工作的经历和感受；
(3) 请你向同龄中学生发出号召。
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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Answer 1

The passage shows a delightful tendency that more teens are volunteering for charitable causes. Such actions set an example to their parents. Gaby Lucy from America is an example.  (29w)
From my point of view, volunteering for charitable causes is of vital importance to teenagers. For, one thing, not only can they acquire far more social experience, but also they can update their skills to deal with different situations in the near future. For another, it helps people in need in the quickest and most direct way, building up a bridge of love among people.
I also once worked as a volunteer in old folks’ home, which I’ll always take pride in. I, together with my group members, helped clean their rooms, washed their clothes and presented a show for them. What impressed me most was that the old folks were so happy to see us that they chatted a lot with us.
In conclusion, volunteer work costs us nothing but helps us gain a lot. Therefore, I hope more teenagers can join us and do what we can to make the world more harmonious.
Summary 2: With the example of Gaby Lucy, a 17-year-old volunteer, once working in Dominican Republic, the writer states that more teenagers are doing voluntary work and they have set good examples to their parents. (33w)

试题分析：这篇书面表达给了一段材料：1．以约30个词概括短文的内容要点； 2．以约120个词就 “青少年从事志愿者工作” 这个主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点： (1) 青少年从事志愿者工作的意义； (2) 简述一次你自己或你身边的人从事志愿者工作的经历和感受； (3) 请你向同龄中学生发出号召。这道题目要求比较严格，所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
点评：本文属于根据原文内容写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。