Question

【题目】假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会。请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加。主要内容如下：

1.聚会时间和地点；

2.聚会人员介绍；

3.其他注意事项。

注意：1词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday. The party will begin at 5:00 pm in my home. There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister. The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face. The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister. All of them can’t wait to see you.

There are other things I want to tell you. Firstly, you should take a No. 218 bus to go to my home. Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that case, I can prepare it better. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件，假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会。请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加。主要内容如下：聚会时间和地点；聚会人员介绍；其他注意事项。写作时认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，要点齐全，语句精炼，简洁明了，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和高级句子。There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister.there be 句型和介词including的运用；The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face.句中who引导定语从句；I hope you can tell me the food you like宾语从句和定语从句完美结合；另外，Firstly, Secondly, in that case, looking forward to等的运用为文章增色添彩。