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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jim is one of my close friend. Two months before, his mother bought a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the computer. To her surprise, Jim just spent a plenty of time play computer games every day. He was interested them. Now he regrets buying the computer. As the matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.friend改为friends。One of+可数名词复数，表示“……之一”。故把friend改为friends。

2.before改为ago。Two months ago意为“两个月前”与一般过去时连用。故把before改为ago。

3.will改为would。主句谓语动词为一般过去时，根据时态一致的原则，故把will改为would。

4.play改为playing。spend time (in) doing sth. 意为“花时间做某事”, 是固定搭配。故把play改为playing。

5.interested后加in。be interested in意为“对……感兴趣”, 是固定搭配。

6. he改为she。his mother指女性。故把he改为she。

7.the改为a。as a matter of fact意为“实际上”，是固定搭配。故把the改为a。

8.wide改为widely。副词修饰动词作状语。故把wide改为widely。

9.computers改为computer。many computer scientists表示许多电脑科学家。应用可数名词单数作定语。故把computers改为computer。

10.what改为that。此处为表语从句且从句意思完整，不缺任何句子成分，故用that引导。