Question

【题目】请根据下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

提示：时下，越来越多的学生使用的是电子词典，而非纸质词典。请根据下表就此现象的利弊做出剖析，并提出自己的看法。

利	1.方便、快捷； 2．提供读音； 3．附带其他功能，如计算器。
弊	1.对眼睛有害，影响视力； 2．电子产品对环境的污染更大。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays more and more students prefer electric dictionaries in their language learning.Generally，edictionaries have many advantages.First，it is more convenient and faster.Besides，with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.Thirdly，an edictionary usually has other functions，for example，it may be used as a calculator.

But every coin has two sides.It also has some disadvantages.The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.To make matters worse，edictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.

As for me，I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲类作文。文章采用三段式，语句严谨，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。with an edictionary the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.句中使用含情态动词的被动语态；The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.句中that引导表语从句；I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary，which is more environmentallyfriendly and less harmful to my health.非限制性定语从句和比较级完美结合；另外，Generally，Besides，Thirdly，for example，To make matters worse，As for me，等的运用为文章增色添彩。