Question

第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。姓 名：孙杨（Sun Yang）

出生日期：1991年12月1日；

出生地点：杭州；

毕业学校：浙江大学；

专 长：大学毕业后专攻长距离自由泳;

主要成就：2012年伦敦奥运会中在两个游泳项目上获得冠军；其中一项打破世界纪录；

2013年巴塞罗那“世界锦标赛”上分别赢得男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳金牌，并被评为本届世锦赛最佳男运动员，成为历史上首次获得这一奖项的亚洲游泳选手。

个人信念：一个人的成功不仅靠天赋，更要有勤奋，毅力和决心。

【写作内容】

参考词汇：长距离自由泳 long-distance freestyle swimming

巴塞罗那 Barcelona 锦标赛championships

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

Sun Yang, born in Hangzhou on Dec.1st, 1991, graduated from Zhejiang University, after which he specialized in long-distance freestyle swimming. In 2012 London Olympic Games, he won championship in two swimming events, in one of which he broke the world record. More outstandingly, he got three gold medals in men's 400m, 800m and 1,500m freestyle swimming events respectively in the World Swimming Championships in Barcelona. What’s more, Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships, becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history. His personal belief is that a man's success depends not only on his talent, but also on his diligence, perseverance and determination.

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考点：考查人物介绍文写作