Question

【题目】写作
假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：
1 礼物选择： 2 你的理由；3 其它和解建议。
注意：
1 词数100左右： 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3 开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you areconsidering making up with Peter．

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always inpoor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body.In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful torebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendlymeans of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you canalso adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner andgoing shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. Ireally hope that we can be good friends forever.
Bestwishes,
Li Hua
【解析】这篇作文要求根据你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议,你根据要点给Tom回一封邮件。写作要点要求：1 礼物选择： 2 你的理由；3 其它和解建议。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点：本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，句子简洁明了，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that you are considering making up with Peter.和that we can be good friends forever.虚拟语气If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday presentfor him.定语从句which is helpful torebuild your friendship.动名词做主语takinga bike和being sincere。It’s convenient for him to句型Nomatter what you do做状语。As far as I know, Inthe meanwhile, Besides, Apart from等连接词。