Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件，提到他上周作为交换生来到北京的一所学校学习，但一时交不到朋友，为此很苦恼。请你用英语给他回信，提一些建议。要点包括:

1. 相信自己；

2. 乐于助人；

3. 参加活动......。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am glad to receive your letter, but I am sorry to hear you’re having trouble in making new friends in your new school.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice.

Firstly, believe in yourself, smile and be friendly, because smiling is an open invitation to others.Secondly, why not take an active part in all the activities ? You can look for people with the same interest as you, whom you are likely to get along with and share your happiness.Lastly, it is a good idea to help others when necessary. If you are always ready to help others, they will understand you better.

I do hope my advice is of much help. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件，提到他上周作为交换生来到北京的一所学校学习，但一时交不到朋友，为此很苦恼。请你用英语给他回信，提一些建议。要点包括:1. 相信自己；2. 乐于助人；3. 参加活动......。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：having trouble in making new friends（在交新朋友上有烦恼）；offer you some advice（提供给你一些建议）；an open invitation to others（对他人的公开邀请）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。