Question

【题目】1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。

2. 是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由。

3. 对家庭教育提出建议。

4. 字数：120字左右

参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil v.

As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways.

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Answer 1

【答案】As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. In the cartoon the father educates their child with a ruler while the mother with a bar of chocolate, which makes their child confused. The picture reflects that the father is too strict with the child and the mother spoils him.

I think neither of their education methods is right. If we always punish children severely when they make mistakes, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence or they will become violent and aggressive, following in their fathers’ footsteps. If we always spoil children, they will turn out to be selfish/self-centered and dependent.

As far as I am concerned, parents should use appropriate methods to educate their children. Since punishment and love both play important roles in children’s education, parents should try to keep a balance between them. Besides they should often communicate with their children to learn what they are thinking of. Also, they are expected to set a good example to children and guide their children properly when necessary. Only by doing so can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，谈论的是家庭教育的问题，写作时要对漫画认真分析，深层理解，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。写看图作文时中心要突出，前言搭后语，注意语言的逻辑性 如：but, even等词的恰当运用能起到不可小看的作用； 意单线表达，而非多头，避免思绪混乱；不要过多地喊口号，唱高调；做到先语言后观点，避免中文式英语。减少比喻，避免间接翻译。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇看图作文，文章采用三段式，内容齐全，结构布局合理，并使用高级句子。As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways.as引导非限制性定语从句；whch makes their child confused.which引导的非限制性定语从句用在句中；If we always punish children severely when they make mistakes, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence或they will become violent and aggressive, following in their fathers’ footsteps.条件句和现在分词做状语完美结合；Since punishment and love both play important roles in children’s education, parents should try to keep a balance between them.since引导原因状语从句；to learn what they are thinking of.what引导宾语从句；Only by doing so can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development.部分倒装的使用堪称经典。