Question

某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening)烹饪(cooking) 防身术(self-defence)护理(nursing）。
［写作内容］
假如你是王华，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。主要内容包括：
（1）你感兴趣的课程；
（2）你期望从这门课程中学到什么；
（3）为什么想学这些内容。
注意： 1. 词数 100字左右
2. 可适当增减细节， 使内容连贯。
3开始和结尾已给， 不计入总词数。
Dear leader，
 I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening，cooking，self-defence, nursing and so on.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                      Yours truly
                                                        Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear leader，
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening， cooking， self-defence, nursing and so on.
I’d like to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers and grasses since I was a child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy
the beauty of nature.
For one thing，I hope to gain more knowledge of gardening ，which can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. Besides, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure plants more, and also , I wish to get more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university. For another, after graduation from college，I will devote my life to cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state ,which will attract more foreigners to visit .
Looking forward to your early reply.
                                   Yours，
                                    Wang hua

考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，包括要点：（1）你感兴趣的课程；（2）你期望从这门课程中学到什么；（3）为什么想学这些内容。运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。