Question

【题目】假定你是李华，寒假期间在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆2月16号要举办中国画展览。请用英语给你的英国朋友Jeff 写一封信邀请他和你一同前往。内容包括：

1.展览时间和地点；

2.展览内容；

3.期待回复。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

How are you doing? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16. A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display. If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot. I’m sure the visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me? I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。

第一步：

审题：邀请信 邀请Jeff参加中国画展览

人称：第一、二和三人称

时态：一般将来时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分邀请Jeff参加中国画展览，第二部分说明展览的具体安排和内容，第三部分期待他的回复。

要点：

1. 邀请Jeff参加中国画展览

2．展览的具体安排

①展览时间和地点：2月16 日，当地美术馆

②展览内容：中国著名艺术家创作的传统中国画

3．期待他的回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

be crazy about；delighted；invite sb. to do…；attend a Chinese painting exhibition；hold；

the local art gallery；on February 16；on display；have a chance to do…；under the guidance of；broaden one’s horizons；have a better understanding of

第三步：连词成句

(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.

(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

(3) The exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16.

(4)A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display.

(5) If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

(6) The visit will broaden our horizons.

(7 ) It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

(8) Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me?

(9) I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

将第一个句子用分词作状语，连接下面两个句子

(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.

(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

→Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.

用状语从句的省略形式改写下面的句子

(5)If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

→If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.

用not only… but also 连接下面的句子

(6) The visit will broaden our horizons .

(7 )It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

→The visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。