Question

【题目】说明：我国某山城张各庄为开放单位。请用英语为来访外宾写一篇简单介绍。内容要求如下：

1. 背景：张各庄（Zhang Ge Zhuang）远离其他村庄。过去，儿童上学困难。1988年成立小学（primary school）

2. 现状：

教师：3人，均为本地人，中学毕业回村执教。

学生：48人。

班级：5个。

科目：语文、数学、自然（Science）、音乐、美术、体育。

学费：免费。

注意：1. 要有标题。

2. 介绍必须包括所给要点，但不要逐条译成英语。

3. 字数：80-100个词。

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Answer 1

【答案】Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School

Until 1988 Zhang Ge Zhuang had no school of its own. It was pretty hard for the children of the village who had to go to school in other villages which were all far away. Now Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. The teachers had finished middle school education before they returned to teach here. The pupils are divided into five different classes, in which six subjects are taught. They are Chinese, maths, science, music, drawing and physical education. Education is free for all children in the village.

【解析】试题分析：

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写一篇文章向外宾介绍张各庄以及张各庄小学的情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：写作目的：向外宾介绍张各庄以及张各庄小学的情况；内容：完整描述背景和现状。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该以一般现在时态为主。4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．。

【亮点说明】

本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达： 1.使用高级句型：It was pretty hard for the children of the village who had to go to school in other villages which were all far away.含有两个定语从句；Now Zhang Ge Zhuang Primary School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.现在分词teaching作定语；The pupils are divided into five different classes, in which six subjects are taught.句中使用非限制性宾语从句。2.使用了重要短语：far away遥远，远离；be divided into被分成。