Question

快餐在中国非常流行,尤其受到青少年的青睐.某英文报委托你写一篇有关快餐食品的英语短文,并包括如下要点:
1. 快餐受欢迎的原因:
1)方便,省时;  2)价格合理,服务好.
2. 快餐食品的不足:营养不均衡.
3. 你对快餐的态度和观点.
注意: 1. 词数: 100—120
2.从营养角度来讲: in terms of nutrition
3.快餐:fast food
4.方便的. Convenient
5.均衡的:balanced
Fast food is very popular with people in China, especially the young. The reasons for its popularity are as follows.
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Answer 1

不唯一
Fast food is very popular with people in China, especially the young. The reasons for its popularity are as follows.
Firstly, with the quick pace of life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving. People can save a lot of time and trouble with food ready made so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities. Secondly. The prices for fast food are reasonable and the service is excellent. However, it is not a good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced.
In my opinion, people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry. If not, they had better have the traditional food.

解析试题分析：
这篇短文是有关快餐的。文章脉络已经清楚，要点也有了。进行写作时，可将要点以单词或短语形式列出来，然后扩成句子。这样做要点不会缺少。然后利用已经学的知识如从句、高级词汇对这些句子进行重组，在句子中加连词。如文章中我们用的firstly,secondly,however,in my opinion等等就比较好。
考点：考查提纲类短文的书面表达
点评：此类写作相比较简单，列出要点后，如何进行合理的拓展，这是一个难点。更难的是：如何更好地利用已经学的知识如从句、高级词汇对这些句子进行重组，如何在句子中加连词等，这些都是难点。这就要求学生平时在多多阅读此类文章，从中汲取有益之处，另外平时要多进行这方面的训练。问及本人的对此事的观点一般我们只写一条，有时也可写两条。另外注意：给出的参考词汇一定要用在文章中去。