Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

To raise students’ awareness of road safety, a traffic police officer were invited to give us lecture in the school’s hall on May 20th. At first, the officer present us with some cases of traffic accidents. It great shocked the students present. Then, the officer analyzed that led to the accidents and stressed the important of following traffic rules. Finally, he detailed some traffic regulation and instructed us not to breaking them.

The lecture was a valuable opportunity for them, from which all the students benefited a lot of. We realized that we should obey the traffic rules strictly.

Answer 1

【答案】1.were→was

2.us后加a

3.present→presented

4.great→greatly

5.that→what

6.important→importance

7.regulation→regulations

8.breaking→break

9.them→us

10.去掉lot后of

【解析】

本文是一篇说明文。讲述了一场提高学生道路安全意识的安全报告会。报告让学生收益匪浅，意识到到应该严格遵守交通规则。

1.考查主谓一致。主语a traffic police officer是第三人称单数，根据时间状语on May 30th可知，句子用一般过去时，故将were改was。

2.考查冠词。lecture“演讲”是可数名词，give sb. a lecture“给某人做演讲”，是固定短语，故填a。

3.考查动词时态。根据语境可知，用一般过去时，故将present改为presented。

4.考查副词。修饰动词用副词做状语， 故将great改为greatly。

5.考查宾语从句。分析句子可知，_____led to the accidents and stressed the important of following traffic rules是宾语从句，从句缺少主语，指物，what引导宾语从句，从句中做主语、宾语或表语，故将that改为what。

6.考查名词。冠词修饰名词，故将important改为importance。

7.考查名词复数。regulation“规则”是可数名词，由some修饰，用复数，故将regulation改为regulations。

8.考查非谓语动词。instruct sb. to do sth.“指示某人做某事”，是固定短语，故将breaking改为break。

9.考查代词。根据语境，此处指“我们”，作宾语用us，故将them改为us。

10.考查介词。分析句子可知，benefit a lot“受益匪浅”，a lot of 后接名词，a lot副词短语，修饰动词。根据句意，故去掉lot后的介词of。