Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

Answer 1

【答案】Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However，

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it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have

serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know

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【解析】

本文是一篇议论文。一般来说，我们喜欢按照我们认为是最好的方法来做事情，可是当我们有问题时向那些爱我们的人寻求建议也是很重要的，因为父母有生活经验。但是有时我们也会避开他们，不想遵循他们的建议，然而随着时间的流逝，我们会知道父母是值得信任的．

第一处：考查谓语动词的时态。本文通篇以一般现在时陈述一个事实，所以此处也要用一般现在时，所以将considered改为consider。
第二处：考查冠词。advice作为"建议"讲是不可数名词，不能用不定冠词a/an修饰，故去掉an，"一条建议"译为"a piece of advice"。所以去掉an。
第三处：考查名词单复数。experience作为"经验"讲时是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把experiences改为experience。
第四处：考查疑问词。分析句意应为"他们知道在不同情况下该怎样去做"，所以此处应该用how表示一种方式，而不用what，故将what改成how。
第五处：考查人称代词，结合上下文分析，句意为"这就是当我们遇到问题时首先应该向他们请教的原因"，所以they应该改为we，表明"我们遇到问题"，所以将they改为we。
第六处：考查副词。结合上下文，前面讲到"遇到问题我们应该首先去请教他们"，后面又说"有时我们会避开他们不想遵循他们的做法"，两者之间是转折关系，故此处应该用However在意义上表示转折，所以将Therefore改为However。
第七处：考查非谓语动词。with是介词，后面不能跟完整的句子，要用with复合结构，with复合结构为：with+宾语+宾语补足语。time与动词pass是主谓关系，所以此处用动词ing形式，所以将passed改为passing。
第八处：考查主谓一致。在这里as well as连接并列成分，作为"也，还"讲，重点强调前者，后者只是顺便提及，前者是主语，这时谓语动词与前者保持一致，主语为my brother，为单数，谓语动词也应该用单数，所以将have改为has。
第九处：考查固定搭配，turn to是固定短语，此处意为"求助于"，所以将for改为to。
第十处：考查固定短语，be worth doing是固定短语，意为"值得做…"，所以将worth前面加are。