Question

假如你是你校英语内刊的编辑李华，你校的一位同学Mary最近在网上结识的一位网友约她见面，她不知道该不该去，因此写信向你咨询。请你用英文给她写一封建议信。内容应包括：

1. 最好不要去见任何网友；

2. 如果确实想见，要保证自身安全（选择人多的公众场合；不要透露过多的个人信息）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数。

Dear Mary,

I’m happy that you have made friends with someone online.________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

I’m happy that you have made friends with someone online. It’s really nice to have a friend to share your happiness and sorrow.But I want to remind you that it can be dangerous to make friends online because you don’t know who the one you are chatting with is. She said she was a girl, but maybe the person is a bad man. So I don’t think it’s a goos idea to see the friend in person.

However, if you insist on meeting him or her, I suggest you choose pubic places, such as KFC, as your meeting place, where there are numerous people. Besides, you shouldn’t let out too much of your personal information.

Hope the suggestions above can be of some help.

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求向玛丽写一封建议信。关于要不要去见网友的事情，要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象for instance, Furthermore,等词，这样文章显得更连贯。

【亮点说明】

It’s really nice to have a friend to share your happiness and sorrow.这是it组形式主语的用法，But I want to remind you that it can be dangerous to make friends online because you don’t know who the one you are chatting with is. 这句话里面有who引导的宾语从句， So I don’t think it’s a goos idea to see the friend in person.这句话用了否定前移， I suggest you choose pubic places, such as KFC, as your meeting place, where there are numerous people.这句话用了定语从句，还有 Besides这样的关联词也要多用。

考点：考查书信类作文