Question

19．假设你是李华，你的朋友李佳最近用英语给你写信询问如何度过一个有意义的暑假．请你根据下面的文字提示用英语给他写一封回信．
1．科学安排，复习功课；
2．积极参加体育锻炼与社会实践活动；
3．与家人一块去旅游．　　　
注意：1．词数：100左右 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
　　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：社会实践活动　social activity
Dear Li Jia，
                                                                 
                                            Yours，
                                                          Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的朋友李佳最近用英语给你写信询问如何度过一个有意义的暑假．请你根据下面的文字提示用英语给他写一封回信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：科学安排，复习功课；积极参加体育锻炼与社会实践活动；与家人一块去旅游    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：more than非常，比…多；go over 复习；What's more而且；not only，but also不仅，而且；take an active part in积极参加； be of great use非常有用；
 I'm more than happy to hear from you and now I'd like to share my suggestions on how to spend the summer holiday．（高分句型一）
What's more，not only can you take exercise as usual but also take an active part in some social activities．（高分句型二）
Also，if possible，traveling with your family is one of the best ways to spend a holiday，which can relax your body as well as broaden your eyes．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Jia，
      I'm more than happy to hear from you and now I'd like to share my suggestions on how to spend the summer holiday．（高分句型一）
      First，being a student，you should put your study in the first place．So it's a good idea to spend much time going over or even learning some new lessons by yourself．What's more，not only can you take exercise as usual but also take an active part in some social activities．（高分句型二）I think it will be of great use to your physical and mental health and help you learn more about society．Also，if possible，traveling with your family is one of the best ways to spend a holiday，which can relax your body as well as broaden your eyes．（高分句型三）
      Hope you will have a meaningful holiday．
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　                                                                                          Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧