Question

假如你是高中一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Rita 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Rita,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
With the development of science and technology, the world is becoming a global village; so English is getting more and more important. What’s more, only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. As a result, I’m not as active as other students in English class.
I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I do believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是高中一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Rita 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数100左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】only by having a good command of English can we see the world through a new window.这个句子用了部分倒装，My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,这个句子用了表语从句，I’d be grateful if you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.这个句子用了宾语从句。