Question

【题目】假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；

2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意:1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 结语已为你写好。

Dear Lucy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to a nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. We’ll go and make dumplings with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together, singing and playing games, which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。

第一步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1. 出发及返回时间； 2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：make dumplings, spend some fun time, be back, at the school gate, Looking forward to.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。