Question

11．假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒．于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信．要点如下：
1．司机的不文明行为（大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等）．
2．希望尽快查清此事．
注意：1．词数100左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封投诉信．写作时，要写清要点，包括：表明写信的目的，具体的不文明行为，提出要求．举例证明时，要用一般过去时态，以第一人称来表述．
重点短语和句型：
complain about 抱怨，投诉
keep on doing sth 老是做某事，持续不断做某事
concentrate on 集中注意力
lose one's balance 失去平衡
prevent…（from）doing sth 阻止干某事
I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast．
句中whose引导定语从句修饰名词bus；not only…but also…连接并列结构．
Then another passenger couldn't bear it，asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind．
句中现在分词asking作伴随状语．
I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again．
句中hope后接宾语从句；should be taken被动语态；to prevent动词不定式作目的状语．

解答 Dear Sir，
   I am Li Hua．I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers'improper and rude behaviors．（表明写信目的）
    Last Sunday，I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast．（高分句型一） So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving，but he didn't pay any attention．What's worse，he drove even faster．Then another passenger couldn't bear it，asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind．（高分句型二）But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance．However，he didn't apologize but said rudely"It's none of your business．"（举例证明）
    I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again．（高分句型三）（提出要求）
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．