Question

假设你是李华。5月13日是母亲节，你的美国朋友Sandy问中国的孩子在这一天有何打算。请你根据以下提示，给她写一封回信, 可增加内容，谈谈你要做的事情，并简单说明原因。
开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
1．有些人帮助母亲做家务； 2．有些人为母亲买礼物；3．还有的买或自制贺卡送给母亲；4.我打算……
要求：100字左右。
Dear Sandy,
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Yours,
Li hua

Answer 1

Dear Sandy
I’m very glad to receive your letter．In your letter, you asked me what we
would do on Mother’s Day in China．Here I would like to tell you something about it.
Generally speaking, some of us would like to help our mothers do some housework, such as tidying the rooms or washing  some clothes, for we are very thankful for all the work they have done for us．Some would like to buy some presents for mothers or send a card. Those who work or study far from their houses can make a phone call and give their best wishes to their mothers. Anyway, we often express our love and gratitude to our mothers in our own way.
As for me, this year I would like to send my mother some flowers as a gift, wishing her to be much younger and happier．Besides, I am going to write her a card, telling her how much she means to me and that I’ll try my best to live up to her expectations．
Have you got any other ideas? Look forward to your reply．
Yours,
Li hua

考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，谈谈中国的孩子在母亲节这一天有何打算，提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述，，Those who work or study far from their houses can make a phone call and give their best wishes to their mothers.这句话有定语从句，还有运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。As for me ，Besides,等词的使用使文章很顺畅。