Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The burden of students have been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received few attention, especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touched moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from his shoulder.

All this reminds me of my mother whom has been doing whatever she can to let me to have the best. But totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to that my mother needs and always think studying well is only thing I can do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help my mother with everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least preparing breakfast myself, so as to share her daily burden. The picture has convinced me that it is even much important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 have改成has

 few改成little

 touched 改成touching

 his改成 her

 whom改成who

 去掉to

 that改成what

 is后面加the

 preparing改成prepare

 much改成more

【解析】

试题分析：

 这句话的主语是The burden of students所以have改成has

 修饰attention把few 改成little

 修饰moment，touched 改成touching“令人感动的“

 这里指代the girl’s mother’s shoulder所以把his改成 her

 用who引导定语从句，在定语从句中做主语

 去掉to，因为let sb do sth

 这里用what引导宾语从句，what在从句中做need的宾语。

 is后面加the，因为是特指the only thing

 和前面的help并列，把preparing 改成prepare

 后面有than说明是比较级，把much 改成more

考点: 考查短文纠错

点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力，要特别注意名词单复数，动词主谓一致，形容词和时态。还有复杂句，如定语从句和宾语从句。