Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处），多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nobody can succeed without making mistakes. I can well remember that last year an English speech contest held in our school. Because my English was the best in our class, so all my classmates encouraged me to take part in the contest. I was so shy a girl that I even dared not answer questions in class. I was afraid of making mistakes in front of so many judge. At last, my classmate Wang Ying, her English was not very good, take part in the contest and won the third prize. Heard the news, I regretted not taking part in it.. As the result, I missed a good chance to show myself.

Now, I have realized the fact which making mistakes is an unavoidable thing in our way to success. Only by making mistakes and correcting them can we make progress step by step and final achieve our goals.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so all---all

【2】judge--judges

【3】her--whose

【4】was not---was

【5】take--took

【6】Heard--Hearing

【7】the---a

【8】which--that

【9】in--on

【10】final--finally

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述作者自己因害怕犯错而错失成功的机会的故事。

【1】so all---all 考察连词。由于已经有because引导状语从句，所以不需要连词，故去掉so。

【2】judge—judges 考察名词单复数形式。有many 修饰，judge（法官）为可数名词，故用其复数形式judges。

【3】her—whose 考察定语从句关系词。此处为非限制性定语从句补充说明Wang Ying，关系词在从句中修饰English，故用whose。

【4】was not---was 考察否定词。根据上下文可知，她的英语很好，故去掉not。

【5】take—took 考察动词时态。作者陈述过去的事情，故用一般过去时，故用took。

【6】Heard—Hearing 考察动词非谓语形式。此处hear不做谓语，与逻辑主语I属于主谓关系，故用现在分词形式表主动，故用hearing。

【7】the---a 考察冠词。此处为固定短语as a result：因此，故用a。

【8】which—that 考察同位语从句连接词。此处为同位语从句解释说明the fact，连接词在从句中不做成分，故用that。

【9】in—on 考察介词。此处为短语on the way to success：通往成功的道路，故用on。

【10】final—finally 考察副词。此处修饰动词achieve需用副词，故用finally。