Question

酒驾是一个谈论很久的话题。酒驾酿成的悲剧一直在发生， 尽管国家出台了严厉的法规， 但是依旧屡禁不止。前有高晓松，近有王志文，这些名人大腕们都没能避免。假设你是李华，请你针对酒驾这一现象，给报社写一篇英文书信， 并谈谈你的看法。

1. 词数；100词左右，  2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯，通顺。

3. 参考词汇；酒驾， drunk driving

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently, even some famous persons like Gao Xiaosong and Wang Zhiwen involved in.

I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary. For one thing, bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth. If someone drives after drinking, it is a great danger to all the others. For another, bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves. As we all know, many drivers lose their lives because of drunk driving every year, which also makes their family into great trouble.

Thus, in my opinion, anyone mustn’t drive after drinking wine, let alone drunk driving. Remember: never drive your car after drinking and drive without drinking forever.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于议论文文体，议论文的文章首先要对文章所表达核心主旨进行把握好，不要跑题。对于本文的写作首先表明自己明确的观点，反对酒驾I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary.然后从两个方面进行阐述一是酒驾的禁令帮助保护别人的安全和健康bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth.另一方面也保护着司机本人bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves.最后对自己的观点进行总结，提出自己的忠告never drive your car after drinking.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目，议论文的写作相对比较容易，对于表达内容层次时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。