Question

2．（Where should I insert the pencil？）

电脑给我们带来方便同时也让我们失去了很多．假如你们学校正在开展主题为"What are we losing in computer era？"的英文征文活动，请你根据漫画提示，并结合自己的实际生活，写一篇120-150的短文．

Answer 1

分析 本书面表达是一篇图画类的写作，仔细观察分析图画的画面，发现是电脑的使用替代了铅笔而导致了书写能力的退化．而本篇作文主题是结合图片讨论电脑让我们失去了什么．考生写作时注意句子的衔接，适当使用连词．同时还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般现在时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 on earth，究竟，plays an important role 扮演重要的角色，turn to sb．for help，向某人寻求帮助，rather than，而不是
高分句子：
On the other hand，however，some of ourselves，especially teenagers，who are addicted to games day and night．本句中含有who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰teenagers．

解答 Today，the world becomes more intellective with the technology of we human beings．So the computers are made．But whether they are good or not on earth，we can't define definitely．（提出话题）
    The computer，in my opinion，I think it plays an important role in our life．we use everyday，we turn to it for help everyday，we have already not been able to be away from them．
On the other hand，however，some of ourselves，especially teenagers，who are addicted to games day and night．（ 高分句型）So much so that，they come to a point of commiting an offense only because they want to play computer games．we  really  should care for and persuade them．（自己看法）Take the picture for example，our later generations wouldn't recogize the pencil for people use computer to write．（描述图画）
    In the end，I want to say，computer is good or bad．The key is that how we use it rather than only saying the surface．（总结）

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．