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【题目】短文改错

Hi, Sarah

It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out玩耍 together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many money. And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me,would you talk to him?

Please help with me and give me some advice.

【答案】

【1】 to

【2】tell改成told

【3】friend 改成friends

【4】sing改成singing

【5】many 改成much

【6】so改成but

【7】how改成what

【8】are改成were

【9】him 改成them

【10】with去掉

【解析】

【1】 to 考查固定用法。want意为想要时后面必须接动词不定式作宾语,不能和动词原形连用。第一段:want后加to want to do为固定搭配,故在want后加to。加上to ,want用不定式担当状语,故加上to。

【2】tell改成told 考查时态。 根据句子的时间状语last time可知谓语动词应该用过去式。根据时间状语last time可知,本句时态应为一般过去时,故将tell改为told。telltold ,根据时间状语last time可知,此句需要用一般过去时,故把tell改成told.

【3】friend 改成friends 考查名词的复数。three后接可数复数名词。句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friends。名词friend为可数名词,其前有three修饰,需要用复数形式,故把friend改成friends。

【4】sing改成singing 考查动名词担当宾语。spend sb+时间或钱+doing sth.花费某人时间或钱做某事。spend some time(in)doing sth.为固定搭配,故将sing改为singing。本句考查句型spend(in)doing sth结构,故把sing改成singing。

【5】many 改成much 考查代词。 many表示可数概念或用来修饰复数可数名词,但是此处cost的宾语应该是钱,而钱是不可数的,所以应该用much指代很多钱。表示消费量,为不可数概念,而many为可数概念,故将many改为much。根据句意,指的是花费很多钱,故用much而非many。

【6】so改成but 考查连词。so意为因此,表结果,显然不合逻辑, 高考短文改错真题解析It's been a month since I came to this new因此应该用but表示前后两部分是转折关系。根据我不想再去了我害怕失去他们的友谊可知,此处应为转折关系,故将so改为but。上一分句意为:我不想再去;下一分句意为:我怕失去他们的友谊,两个分句之间有转折关系,故把so改成but。

【7】how改成what 考查疑问词的选择。 how不能作宾语,因此应该改为what来作动词do的宾语。在此句中,特殊疑问词充当第二个do的宾语,故将How改为What。本句中do之后缺少宾语,表示事情,故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。

【8】are改成were 考查虚拟语气。 根据would you talk to him可知,本句是一个含有if条件句的虚拟语气。表示与现在或将来事实相反时从句动词应该用过去式。条件从句与现在事实相反,谓语动词使用过去式,故将are改为were。根据句子可知,此处为虚拟语气,与现在事实不相符,故把are改成were。

【9】him 改成them 考查代词。本题属于代词的指代不明。应该将him改为them这样才与前文的their一致,指代前文的朋友。第二段第八句:himthem根据上文可知,这里指作者的三个新朋友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。

【10】with去掉 考查介词。help为及物动词直接加宾语 help为及物动词,与me构成动宾结构,因此,with在此处多余,故去掉with。

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