Question

假设你班要出一期关于“A Great Man”的英语墙报，请根据以下提示用英语写一篇关于“Nelson Mandela”的短文，刊登在此墙报上。

简介	1918年出生在南非；1943年加入ANC，领导黑人进行争取平等和自由的反种族歧视斗争；曾蹲监狱27年；1993年获诺贝尔和平奖；1994年被选为第一位黑人总统；2013年因癌症去世。
个人评价	......

注意：
短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
词数：120左右。
参考词汇：anti-racial discrimination 反种族歧视
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.     
                                                                         

Answer 1

Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people. He was born in South Africa in 1918 and joined the ANC in 1943. He led the black people in the campaign of the anti-racial discrimination for freedom and equality. As a result, he was in prison for 27 years. In 1993, he won the Nobel Peace Prize for his contribution. Highly respected by his people, he was elected the first black president of South Africa. Unfortunately, our beloved leader died of cancer in 2013.
For all his life, Nelson Mandela had striven for the liberation of African nations. He, who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the development of Chian-South Africa relations. Although the great man has left, Mandela’s thought and his spirit will live forever.
He is the pride of the African people as well as the world.

解析试题分析：本书面表达是一篇人物介绍类写作。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in prison，die of，play an important role in，make great contributions to, as well as；还运用句型who引导的非限定性定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：As a result，Although，and 等等。
考点：人物介绍类写作